Monday 7 October 2013

सीधे सरल शब्दों में, मैंने दिल की बात कही है......!!!

सीधे सरल शब्दों में,                                 
मैंने दिल की बात कही है....
सीधे सरल तरीके से,
तुम्हारे दिल तक पहुच गयी है.... 


सोच समझ कर अगर कहती मैं,
तो बात न इतनी सीधी होती...
वक़्त बहुत लगता फिर तो,
तुम्हारे दिल तक न पहुची होती...... 

होठो तक आते-आते जैसे,
कोई बात ठहर गयी थी... 
सवालो के जवाब पाते-पाते,
जैसे कोई बात उलझ गयी थी... 
अब मैंने न कुछ भी,
सुलझाने की कोशिश की है....
बस सीधे सरल शब्दों में,
सीधी-सीधी बात कही है 
सीधे सरल तरीके से,
तुम्हारे दिल तक पहुच गयी है.....

भावो और एहसासों को,
अल्फाज़ न अपने दे पायी.... 
दिल के जज्बातों को,
आवाज न अपनी दे पायी....
कहने को कुछ मैं कब से,
गहरे शब्दों को ढूंढ़ रही थी..... 
शब्द मिले न मुझको ऐसे,
हार गयी मैं.....
सीधे दिल से दिल की बात कही है.....
सीधे सरल तरीके से,
तुम्हारे दिल तक पहुच गयी है.......!!!

55 comments:

  1. प्रेम की भाषा सीधी,सरल सौम्य होती हैं ,जबकि प्रेम जिंदगी की तरह कठिन ,आसान रास्तो से होकर गुजरता हैं |

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  2. कहने को कुछ मैं कब से,
    गहरे शब्दों को ढूंढ़ रही थी.....
    शब्द मिले न मुझको ऐसे,
    हार गयी मैं.।
    बे-मिसाल
    कुर्बान जाऊँ ऐसे हार पर

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  3. बहुत ही कोमल अभिव्यक्ति...
    सीधे सरल तरीके से कही बात दिल तक पहुँच ही जाती है...
    :-)

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  4. सीधे सरल शब्द ही दिल में जल्दी उतरते हैं | बहुत खूब |

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  5. बहुत सुन्दर भावाव्यक्ति.....

    अनु

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  6. प्रेम की भाषा हमेशा सीधी,और सरल होती हैं !
    नवरात्रि की बहुत बहुत शुभकामनायें-

    RECENT POST : पाँच दोहे,

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  7. बहुत सरलता से व्यक्त किया मन के भावों को, सुन्दर..

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  8. आपकी इस प्रविष्टि् की चर्चा आज मंगलवार (08-10-2013) मंगलवारीय चर्चा---1292-- वो पंख अब भी संभाले रखे हैं मैंने .... में "मयंक का कोना" पर भी है!
    --
    सूचना देने का उद्देश्य है कि यदि किसी रचनाकार की प्रविष्टि का उपयोग किसी पत्रिका में किया जाये तो उसकी सूचना देना व्यवस्थापक का नैतिक कर्तव्य होता है।
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    शारदेय नवरात्रों की हार्दिक शुभकामनाओं के साथ।
    सादर...!
    डॉ.रूपचन्द्र शास्त्री 'मयंक'

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  9. सुन्दर प्रस्तुति-
    मंगल-कामनाएं आदरणीया-

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  10. सीधे और सरल तरीके से कही बात दिल तक जरुर पहुंची होगी.......
    बहुत खूबसूरत रचना !!

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  11. जीवन में जितनी सरलता ... सीधेपन से अपनी बात कही जाए ... उतना ही ठीक रहता है ... सीधे दिल से दिल तक पहुँचती है बात ... भावमय रचना है ...

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  12. बहुत सुन्दर भावाव्यक्ति.....

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  13. सीधी और सरल बात दिल तक ज़रूर पहुँचती है...... शुभकामनायें |

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  14. खूबसूरत लफ्ज
    सुषमा जी

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  15. दिल से निकली दिल तक पहुंची .........

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  16. बहुत ही सुन्दर कोमल अभिव्यक्ति...

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  17. प्रेम की भाषा सहज सरल ही जान पड़ती है

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  18. दिल की नज़्म दिल तक पहुंची ...सुन्दर !!

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  19. दिल की नज़्म दिल तक पहुंची ..बधाई

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  20. सीधे दिल से सीधी बात यानि सच्ची बात. सुन्दर रचना.

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  21. बहुत सुन्दर प्रस्तुति..
    आपको सूचित करते हुए हर्ष हो रहा है कि आप की इस प्रविष्टि की चर्चा शनिवार 12/10/2013 को त्यौहार और खुशियों पर सभी का हक़ है.. ( हिंदी ब्लॉगर्स चौपाल : 023)
    - पर लिंक की गयी है , ताकि अधिक से अधिक लोग आपकी रचना पढ़ सकें . कृपया पधारें, सादर ....

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  22. good , read and follow me also , i will also .....

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  23. बिना प्रयास के जो होता है, उसकी बात ही अलग है

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  24. सीधे सरल शब्दों में,
    मैंने दिल की बात कही है....
    सीधे सरल तरीके से,
    तुम्हारे दिल तक पहुच गयी है....



    bahut sunder dhang se rachna mein man ke bhaavon ko darshaya hai

    shubhkamnayen

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  25. सीधे दिल से दिल की बात कही है.....
    सीधे सरल तरीके से,
    तुम्हारे दिल तक पहुच गयी है......

    प्रेम का कोमल और सच्चा अहसास
    प्रेम कि सार्थक स्वीकारोक्ति
    बहुत सुंदर----
    उत्कृष्ट प्रस्तुति
    सादर-----

    आग्रह है--- मेरे ब्लॉग में भी सम्मलित हों--
    करवा चौथ का चाँद ------

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